SPAGHETTI '88...flash fiction!
Posted: Wed Jun 06, 2007 12:38 pm
(I post this here just to "update" this thread that has remained dormant for quite a time now)
In my return flight from Manila to Davao on 2 june 2007, I came across this one-page spread congratulating the 25 Journalism Graduates of Manila Times. The name of one graduate caught my attention, and thus became my muse. Here's her pic:
If this were a writing workshop, the facilitator would say: okay, from this name, write a story. Just that, a name, and nothing more.
this unique name inspired me to write my first flash fiction. According to Wikepedia, flash fiction is fiction characterized by its extreme brevity, as measured by its length in words, without, of course, sacrificing the elements of storytelling. While there is no universally accepted exact word limit, generally most flash-fiction pieces are between 250 and 1,000 words long.
My flash fiction below has 464 words.
Spaghetti ‘88
by k_spy
“Spaghetti’s here,†says the man outside.
In your mind you see her lay on the narrow table the food that she always brings. Until now it eludes you why she does this when she knows you have stopped eating it since the incident. Perhaps it's her way of letting you exorcise your demon.
You met her father on this generation’s luckiest day: 8-8-88! You were at your favorite restaurant when he asked if he could join you. You were actually done but good manners aside, you didn’t want to foist bad luck on him by leaving just when he was about to eat.
His tray carried only spaghetti.
Outside, the Dragon Dance that you came to watch had begun. But then he spoke and time lost its sense.
Soon after that, you dated. And because you hated spaghetti, he made you learn to love it. A year later, you named your daughter after it.
“You hear me? Spaghetti’s waiting for you,†the man outside says.
You glance at the cracked mirror one last time, tuck a wisp of gray hair behind your ear, and head for the hall.
She’s a sight in a white sun dress and you wonder if she would wear white to her debut in September. Or if she would finally wear---after a long while---the smile that reminds you of him.
As you sit, she opens a Tupperware that contains pasta and another that contains the sauce. Something grumbles in the pit of your stomach.
She mixes the pasta and the sauce just as he taught her. Spurts hit your dress but you bother not to wipe them as they blend well with the orange you’re wearing.
She fills two plates with spaghetti. “Here,†she pushes one towards you.
You pick up the fork, jab the spaghetti, and twist it. Then as always, you stop and close your eyes: The knife felt cold in your hand as you watched furtively in the dark. As orgasm gripped him, you raised the knife. But then he turned as though he knew, and the knife brushed past his shoulder, into the mouth of the girl under him.
He rolled out of bed. But the sheets tangled at his feet and he fell to the floor. You lunged and straddled him, then you stabbed him everywhere, twisting the knife each time. Blood squirted on your face but your hand went up and down until you could no longer see.
“Ma, are you alright?â€Â
You open your eyes and see that your knuckles have turned white from gripping the fork.
“It’s been three years," she says, reaching for your hand.
You look at her. And all you can see is the scar on her lips.
In my return flight from Manila to Davao on 2 june 2007, I came across this one-page spread congratulating the 25 Journalism Graduates of Manila Times. The name of one graduate caught my attention, and thus became my muse. Here's her pic:
If this were a writing workshop, the facilitator would say: okay, from this name, write a story. Just that, a name, and nothing more.
this unique name inspired me to write my first flash fiction. According to Wikepedia, flash fiction is fiction characterized by its extreme brevity, as measured by its length in words, without, of course, sacrificing the elements of storytelling. While there is no universally accepted exact word limit, generally most flash-fiction pieces are between 250 and 1,000 words long.
My flash fiction below has 464 words.
Spaghetti ‘88
by k_spy
“Spaghetti’s here,†says the man outside.
In your mind you see her lay on the narrow table the food that she always brings. Until now it eludes you why she does this when she knows you have stopped eating it since the incident. Perhaps it's her way of letting you exorcise your demon.
You met her father on this generation’s luckiest day: 8-8-88! You were at your favorite restaurant when he asked if he could join you. You were actually done but good manners aside, you didn’t want to foist bad luck on him by leaving just when he was about to eat.
His tray carried only spaghetti.
Outside, the Dragon Dance that you came to watch had begun. But then he spoke and time lost its sense.
Soon after that, you dated. And because you hated spaghetti, he made you learn to love it. A year later, you named your daughter after it.
“You hear me? Spaghetti’s waiting for you,†the man outside says.
You glance at the cracked mirror one last time, tuck a wisp of gray hair behind your ear, and head for the hall.
She’s a sight in a white sun dress and you wonder if she would wear white to her debut in September. Or if she would finally wear---after a long while---the smile that reminds you of him.
As you sit, she opens a Tupperware that contains pasta and another that contains the sauce. Something grumbles in the pit of your stomach.
She mixes the pasta and the sauce just as he taught her. Spurts hit your dress but you bother not to wipe them as they blend well with the orange you’re wearing.
She fills two plates with spaghetti. “Here,†she pushes one towards you.
You pick up the fork, jab the spaghetti, and twist it. Then as always, you stop and close your eyes: The knife felt cold in your hand as you watched furtively in the dark. As orgasm gripped him, you raised the knife. But then he turned as though he knew, and the knife brushed past his shoulder, into the mouth of the girl under him.
He rolled out of bed. But the sheets tangled at his feet and he fell to the floor. You lunged and straddled him, then you stabbed him everywhere, twisting the knife each time. Blood squirted on your face but your hand went up and down until you could no longer see.
“Ma, are you alright?â€Â
You open your eyes and see that your knuckles have turned white from gripping the fork.
“It’s been three years," she says, reaching for your hand.
You look at her. And all you can see is the scar on her lips.
